You are a very good at drawing, you shade well, you can do all the details.
The boobs admittingly got my attention - and not exactly in a good way seeing as I'm a girl and I'm slightly rolling my eyes at a typical guy drawing balloons but I suppose you did that for effect. But the face and hands of her body are nice. I didn't really see her legs or behind though - I wasn't aware they were in the picture until I was staring at it for a while. They look quite disconnected to the front part of the body. Perhaps it's due to the fact that they seem really small compared to the front. Perhaps the boobs are throwing me off I guess there is also the fact that the front part is the only part of the drawing that has darker shades and inking - that really make an impact and catch the viewer's eye. The legs miss out on that.
There is also something about the composition of this that makes it look incomplete. You can do the details of the individual plants and the girl nicely. But the way they are arranged doesn't appeal to me. The amount of white spaces I suppose give me that impression. I guess its also the fact that none of the plants have that dark eyecatching impact of the sleeves and some them look a bit sketchy.
I hope you don't find my critique too mean. I certainly don't mean it that way. You can certainly draw better than I can in all these respects and you can feel free to disregard anything I've said.
The boobs admittingly got my attention - and not exactly in a good way seeing as I'm a girl and I'm slightly rolling my eyes at a typical guy drawing balloons but I suppose you did that for effect. But the face and hands of her body are nice. I didn't really see her legs or behind though - I wasn't aware they were in the picture until I was staring at it for a while. They look quite disconnected to the front part of the body. Perhaps it's due to the fact that they seem really small compared to the front. Perhaps the boobs are throwing me off
There is also something about the composition of this that makes it look incomplete. You can do the details of the individual plants and the girl nicely. But the way they are arranged doesn't appeal to me. The amount of white spaces I suppose give me that impression. I guess its also the fact that none of the plants have that dark eyecatching impact of the sleeves and some them look a bit sketchy.
I hope you don't find my critique too mean. I certainly don't mean it that way. You can certainly draw better than I can in all these respects and you can feel free to disregard anything I've said.
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